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夜神月 - 2007-5-24 11:04:00

这是我看到的一个ps，但是觉得这样的ps也能申到奖感到很诧异，大家看看。

PS背景简介：

全程申请服务客户，女，环境工程专业（学士、硕士），6年环境设计工程师工作经验，申请7所美国大学，获得两所美国大学的全奖。签证一次通过。

The Spirit of Cooking

The aroma of stewed chicken fascinated my colleagues. Not long ago, my meal and cookery surprised folks during lunchtime. Actually, I have been a good cook for years. It takes me only one hour to prepare seven or eight courses for ten guys. A soup recipe with three condiments can be changed to five through my creation. What is my friends' opinion on my meals? Tasty.

The spirit of cooking is research and innovation, the same as science. Look at below comparisons: Science=Cook; Instrument=Utensil; Material=Ingredient; Method=Cuisine; Discussion=Evaluation; Academia=Eaters. Chinese cooking has thousands of years history, little chance to breakthrough. However, Environmental Engineering, still has a lot of opportunities.

It has been ten years since I chose this major and profession. Education of Bachelor and Master programs plays a role, which let me learn basics and how to do research, use instruments, review literature, analyze data, and write thesis; working serves as a forever school, which keeps me studying, solving problems, and to be practical. I have grasped most things on process design of wastewater treatment plant, done some research, and served on onsite installations and commissioning. By the way, I have learned some knowledge on concrete and steel structure, and it helps on better process design, and cost control for construction and operation.

Why choose your graduate program? I want to enhance my academic capability, and to be a Process Design Engineer with strong research skills on process, technology, parameters, plus a broadened view, is my epistemic motivation.

Well, if we can work together, let us cook ideas together.

beyond - 2007-5-28 10:50:00

不是吧~~~~~:P
这也太短了吧

魅上照 - 2007-5-28 10:52:00

真行，这样都成……

胖胖小飞象 - 2007-5-28 15:58:00

楼主在开玩笑吧? 谁敢这样冒险!

夜神月 - 2007-5-28 17:09:00

引用:

原帖由 胖胖小飞象 于 2007-5-28 15:58:00 发表
楼主在开玩笑吧? 谁敢这样冒险!

我也觉得奇怪.不看不知道.世界真奇妙啊!

201 - 2007-5-28 17:50:00

真精神！！！！！！

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三等功 - 2007-5-29 10:04:00

自然法则.强者生存

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河粉 - 2007-5-29 10:25:00

问渠哪得清如许，为有源头活水来。

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kwoyi - 2008-2-17 9:01:00

我觉得不错:default7:

wxfily0607 - 2008-3-4 10:11:00

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