【留学Email】03.请求初步评估 Ask for a Preliminary Assessment

立地崖 - 2007-6-13 13:24:00

　　奋斗了很久就是要出国看看，选定学校了怎么和他们联系，最方便快捷的沟通方式当然可以选择用Email。如果你想自己DIY一下你的留学，那么每周三可以和立地崖一起学写“留学EMAIL” ，我们将把关键的几封邮件都学会，剩下就看你的了。当然，如果你急于出国，还是要选择艾迪国际专业的留学服务详细咨询哦～

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Chapter 1 申请前的询问
　　虽然越来越多的学校提供了网上留学申请的方式，但是网上申请需要以信用卡的方式交纳申请费，这对中国学生来说很不方便，因此，书面申请仍然是广大“飞友”的首选。
　　怎样写Email向学校要申请材料？怎样询问是否能免除高昂的申请费？怎样在寄出厚厚一叠申请材料之前，请教授作个初步评估？你是否曾经为不知如何下笔而一筹莫展？相信下面的“他山之石”一定会令你信心百倍地开始 “飞跃重洋”的准备之旅。

§3、请求初步评估 Ask for a Preliminary Assessment
:victory:1、实用范例
From:****
To: ****
Date:***

Subject: Is It Advisable for Me to Apply Doctorate Research?

Dear Ms. Nichols,

Thank you for forwarding to me the application and recommendation forms. Before I send the application package, I wish to get some preliminary indication from you about my chance of pursuing graduate studies at you university.

A major in Mass Communication, I am deeply interested in my graduate program, which seems to offer the kind of advanced training that I need to further my career. I am the straight A student through the four undergraduate years. The academic record of my graduate studies is also very good. And I do a lot research during the past few years.

Frankly speaking, financial problem will be a great for my consideration. Coming from an impoverished family, I cannot possibly pay up for graduate studies with either my own or my parents’savings. My enrollment, if I get accepted, will therefore hinge on the availability of sufficient assistance to cover both my tuition and other expenses.

Given the information here, could you give me a preliminary assessment of my qualifications and the chance I stand in winning an offer of both acceptance and full financial assistance? Do you think it is advisable for me to apply? If your answer is positive, I will surely compete for admission into your program.

Yours sincerely,
Fei Yue

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主题：我适合申请攻读博士学位吗？

尊敬的尼古拉斯女士：

　　感谢您给我寄来申请表格和推荐信表格。在寄出我的申请材料之前，我希望您能对我进入贵校学习的概率作出一个预先的评估。
　　我的专业是大众传媒，我对所学的研究生课程非常感兴趣，现在的训练对于我日后的事业发展是必要的准备。我读本科时是全优生，读研究生的成绩也很好。在过去的几年里，我作了不少研究。
　　坦白的说，奖学金是我考虑的一个重要问题。我的家庭并不富裕，我和我父母都无力承担读研究生的费用。如果我被录取，我的学费和其他开支都要靠资助。
　　鉴于以上的信息，您能对我是否被录取、获得全额奖学金作个预先的评估吗？您认为我适合申请吗？如果你的答复是肯定的，我一定会申请。

您诚挚的，

飞跃

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