Exposed
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØOïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØIf a man indicates his wishes of exposing himself in public, he might get
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØarrested strightaway. But for a boy who has deficient English speaking
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØability, this slip of the tongue simply brings him stimulating and memorable
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØexperience, and of course, laughter. My foreign hostess Nancy, with wavy
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØblonde hair, introduced me the student life in US. “Kids here,” she paused
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØand served me another pancake, “are exposed to the society. They can have
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØso much fun out of school.”
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØLost in reflection with a little jealousy, I muttered, “I wanna be exposed
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØtoo.”
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØA burst of laughter abruptly jolted me back into the present
.(拉回到现在?之前说的不就是当时的事吗?) Nancy was
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØlaughing hilariously while I glued my eyes on her in confusion. Something
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØwrong with the pancake?
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØIn a minute or so, she stopped laughing and said, “I’m sure you will.
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØWelcome to US.”
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØOïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØAt the end of my Junior 2
(这是什么意思啊?大三下学期?没这种说法的), I participated in the summer camp Green Across
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØthe Pacifc(GATP) and went to US for a one-month trip. I yearned for a new
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØplace where I could explore a foreign culture, where I could encounter
(encounter有点负面的意思,遇到的往往是困难啊,什么的,所以这里不如就直接用meet好了)OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØ
people of backgrounds unlike mine
(后面这句很怪,是指背景与我不同的人吗?改成从句吧,会好一些), and where I could play without parents’
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØobservation. From the minute I left San Francisco International Airport, the
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØpalm trees along the clean street, the ubiquitously salty breeze from the
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØPacific Ocean, and my cravings for adventure in the new surroundings told me
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØthat I was definitely “not in Canton anymore.” Like a young Columbus
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØturned loose, from west coast to east coast, I set out on expeditions into
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØevery single place within my vision, waiting for another brand new world to
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØappear.
(前后两个部分的衔接不是很好,过渡的地方需要加强)Sometimes I got lost. I can still recall that I lost my tour bus on
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØTime Square because I was too indulged in the albums at Virgin Megastore. A
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØsurge of fear crept over me as I was rushing down the street in panic. What
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØif I
never found (couldn't find就可以了,never有点太绝对了)the bus? Eventually I did find it, and with my heart still
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØfluttering violently, I sensed an inexplicably secret excitement that
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØintensified and won out over my fear. That was an insatiable quest to
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØexplore, to discover, and to expose myself to the world full of
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØpossibilities.
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØOïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØAlthough it was difficult to understand everything going on with my little
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØmind, I soon came to realize my unique presence in this new stir fry
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØenvironment. By the time I stood in the UN headquarter, looking above the
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØflags from around the globe, I felt as if people of different races,
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØnationalities and religion were smiling at me. That moment was one of the
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØmost sublime of my life. I heard passionate symphony echoes and crescendos
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØtowards its climax. Every note sent a warm sensation from my head through my
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØchest and pulsing though my body, summoning me to a solemn ceremony. I was
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØgranted a new identity. More than a Cantonese, or a Chinese, I became a
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØworld citizen. With this new ID, I am free to expose myself to different
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØplaces in the world, sharing my stories, my culture and my legacy.
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØOïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØAt the last night in US, I prepare a Cantonese dinner for my host family.
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØThat meal, seasoned by my gratitude and joy in the past month, seemed to
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØemit an irresistable aroma of Chow Rice and coffee. I gazed at their chewing
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØmouths, expecting a response. Nancy put down her spoon to look me in the
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØeye. As she raised her thumb in praise, a beam of light transcended her
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØpupils to produce a telling spark of appreciation. If only my parents, who
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØwere thirteen time zones away, could have been by the table to indeed enjoy
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØthis unforgetable meal with us.ÑmÄòKôÕbbs.eduglobal.comݼ¦¾r[8ô
OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØ OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØ全文行文比较漂亮,但是主旨体现的不够,通过阅读完整篇文章,不知道到底想表达些什么。想说明自己能融入美国社会吗?最好能够有一个点题的话出来OïñþF!bbs.eduglobal.comÛ²Üy<¢ÐØ