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抱歉打扰,但我想要了解些关于莫纳什的情况。¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
我是个普通的中国学生,并且我家庭并不很富裕。¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
然而,莫纳什是我的梦想。¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
我今年即将高中毕业,我已经下定决心要进莫纳什,无论付出多少努力,无论付出多大代价。¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
但是我爸拒绝了我,几乎破碎了我的梦,因为我们可能没有足够的资金……¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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Sorry to bother you,but I want to know something about how to go to Monash.I'm ordinary Chinese student,and my family isn't so rich.However,Monash is my dream.I will gruaduate from senior high this year,and I am determined to go to Monash,no matter how hard I should work and no matter it takes.My father refused me and nearly broke my dream,because we maybe haven't got enough money.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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Date: Mon, Apr 7, 2008 11:52 AM¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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Subject: DAD,PLEASE SEND ME TO MONASH¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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Dad,¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
It's the first time I communicate with you in this way,and it's also the first time I talk to you about my ideal.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
I have already looked into Monash University,which is one of the best in Austria.I'm determined to go to there no matter what it takes.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
There are several reasons for me to go there and I want to tell you faithfully.First of all,I got known Monash from a girl,who is my first love when I was in the middle school.I have known her for over 5 years but haven't said a word to her.I haven't seen her for ages and recently heard from her.She is now in Monash and feel homesick.I desire to see her in Monash again.Second,Monash is more famous than any other university in China.I desire to go there,also for my better future.There will be more chances than in China.Third,as you know,I once got the 3rd prize in the national English contest.I believe I can easiliy adapt to the new environment.It's time for me to explore the outside world now.And you know,I don't want to lead my life in an ordinary way.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
Please respect my decision.I know what I'm going to do,and I'm really determined.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
I'm not making a joke and perhaps you can feel it's the first time I take my life so seriously.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
I know,for so many years,you have done a lot for me.It's not easy for you to support me to study abroad.However,to realize my dream,you are the only person that can be helpful and that I can rely on.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
Trust me,I'm independent enough.No pains,no gains.I know life there is not easy too.But I promise to get the scholarship befor the end of the 2nd year.And I also promise not to take on a girlfriend befor I get a job.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
Monashi is my choice.I am ready to overcome all channellings to come.Please send me to Monash as soon as possible.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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PLEASE SEND ME TO MONASH!¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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Love from,¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
Swissti.¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
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相信我的承诺,透过我用感情写的这封信;¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò
相信我的能力,通过我用英语写的这封信。¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò

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您好,您的情况我们已经初步了解,因为没有您的联系方式,所以给你发了电子邮件,请您给我留个电话,我们会尽快和您取得联系¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò

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回复:PLEASE SEND ME TO MONASH

I have sent it to your mail box.Thanks¼þ×ô¦›“X¥^bbs.eduglobal.com‚û"þ̶ò

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